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Reviewer: Alia (Signed)
23 Mar 2009 4:31 am
A good story. The only problem I had was the fact that a ship strong enough for space flight or to submerge under the ocean would not likely be weak enough to have a tree branch break through the view screen.

Author's Response: Ah well, hadn't thought of that at the time. Glad you thought it was good despite that. Thanks.
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Reviewer: Dreamer22 (Anonymous)
03 Dec 2007 3:30 pm
you know, now that I think about it, if the jumper has to be cloaked, they always cloak it after going through the stargate, makes you wonder why as we know invisible things can get through, ie Daniel in the ep we meet his grandfather he is invisible but follows Teal'C through...hmmm
::coughs:: anyway ver well done I greatly enjoyed this!!

Author's Response: Thank you - yeah, it does make you wonder the whole jumper and invisible thing - perhaps the cloak uses up too much power going through the wormhole?! Anyway, glad that you enjoyed this one as well.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
14 Aug 2007 7:25 pm
This was a very tense mission with things going wrong all over the place. Not that that was a *surprise*, just tense ;).

There were a few worrying moments when John and Rodney's senses stopped working normally (normally for them, at least) and when the head baddie was revealed, but it all turned out okay in the end, with John and Rodney back to their usual banter :).

Laura.

Author's Response: Ah, the plot just kept twisting and turning on me - I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't going to use the head baddie at first, but the temptation just grew too much...there's just something about him, isn't there?! :) Thank you for the review.
Chapter 3 - The Obligatory Epilogue...
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