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Reviewer: Daine (Anonymous)
24 Feb 2008 11:34 pm
This was a brilliant story, reminiscent of Cause and Effect (Star Trek TNG) and Window of Opportunity (SG-1). I especially enjoyed how each loop explained a little bit more of the story, including some red herrings.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the slow reveal on the loops worked for you; I didn't want them to get too repetitive.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
31 Aug 2007 5:41 am
I liked how the whole team jumped up and hugged Teyla when the loop restarted.

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that; that was one of the first scenes I came up with when I started writing this.
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Reviewer: Twinchy (Signed)
29 Aug 2007 8:47 am
Wow, this is such a brilliant story with tense and gorgeous writing; it never let me off the hook! Easily one of the best fics I read in quite some time. *applauds in awe*
I loved the way you varied the different scenarios and thereby also gave more understanding of the general situation on the planet.
I'm incredibly glad, they made it home in the end.

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comments! I'm glad to hear the different scenarios worked for you without being too repetitive.
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Reviewer: Ellex (Signed)
29 Aug 2007 1:25 am
Excellent story! The different scenarios were ingenious.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad they worked for you.
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