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Reviewer: BakaSensei (Signed)
06 Sep 2007 1:52 pm
MUAHAHA! That was a lovely first fic/first kiss. Good job!

And Rodney saying "shmoopy"? I can totally picture that so clearly that it's frightening. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I was kinda worried about the kiss part. :) rnrnlol, me too! Scary. ;D
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Sep 2007 5:22 am
I'm afraid I'll have to join the rest of the women in saying 'awwww' ;). I'm glad they didn't bother with the denying stage for too long.

Laura.

Author's Response: Yes! Denying is ~bad~. ;D Thanks for the review! :)
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Reviewer: Twinchy (Signed)
05 Sep 2007 1:48 am
Funny and lovely story with great teasing on Radek's part! Sweet idea, the two tattoos meaning 'one', loved it.

You got the characterization quite good but I think (on a slightly critical note) that the present tense would have worked better with the I-perspective of Rodney. Thanks for putting it up here, I really enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D Yeah, I just love Radek. :) rnYou have a point there about the present tense - thanks for pointing it out. :) I'll remember that for future stuff. :D rnrn
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Reviewer: raphe1 (Anonymous)
04 Sep 2007 11:11 am
Very lurvely! I love the tattoos and you captured first person Rodney beautifully :-) I hope you write lots more stories.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)
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Reviewer: FeDhu (Anonymous)
04 Sep 2007 3:13 am
Awwww. Yup, guilty, I'm disgustingly shmoopy too. :) good story.

Author's Response: Hee. I like shmoopy. :D Thanks for the review! :)
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
04 Sep 2007 12:56 am
Fraid I am going to have to agree with all the women in the infirmary. Awwwww, this is sweet. :)

Author's Response: Yay, I was aiming for sweet. :) Thanks for the review! :D
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Reviewer: starbright (Anonymous)
04 Sep 2007 12:05 am
Aww, this is so great! You nailed Rodney perfectly, with the internal babble and panic. Very funny, and a fabulous first effort. Now write some more! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. :D
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