Reviews For Taking Advantage of Opportunities
Okay.. I LOVE this story.. so glad you wrote it. I also love the ending.. John coming in handy to touch .. stuff. heheheh
Reviewer: firstname.lastname@example.org (Anonymous)
15 Jan 2006 4:02 pm
wow!that was great! i loved this so much! :D i loved their interactions and john's reaction to rodney and just wow. lovely pre-atlantis fic!
Reviewer: miscbills (Anonymous)
14 Nov 2005 7:14 pm
this is a great story, love it.
Reviewer: darkhavens (Anonymous)
13 Jul 2005 4:31 am
I told you I was hooked. *g* I've been reading backwards through the McShep here at Wraithbait and I just found this! Go you! Hot and funny and so cute - I can see why you like the pre-Atlantis idea. It certainly explains why they were joined at the hip from the very start. *g*
Reviewer: Robogirl (Anonymous)
02 Jun 2005 11:04 pm
I really, really loved this. Your characterization, the flow of your story, the dialogs, ideas.. I think you just write the way I like it, so, being all selfish, I'll stick to your stories. =)
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
12 Apr 2005 10:55 pm
Well, you seem to have gotten the characterisation right here. I liked the banter and snark between John and Rodney. It's true that there doesn't seem to be much in the way of pre-Atlantis Shep/McKay, so I'm pleased you decided to write this. I liked the idea of John deciding to go because Rodney was. The Ancient to-do list was an intriguing little device too. Oh, and it was hot too :) And trust Rodney to be contrary! All nerves and rambling until John kissed him, and then, not so much ::rolls eyes, but in a good way ;):: Laura.
Terrific story. I thought your characterizations were spot-on, and very funny. I love the idea of John choosing to go to Atlantis because of Rodney. And Rodney's reaction, of course, was just priceless. Great stuff. :-)