Reviews For The Last Stop

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Reviewer: Rhydwen (Anonymous)
09 Nov 2007 5:33 pm

"Not for you," McKay replied exasperated. "For keeping my staff in line."

Excelent line.

Great fic

Author's Response: Thank you. That line popped into my head when I was on an adult site to get items I could use in the story. I just had to work into the story.
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Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous)
24 Oct 2007 6:52 am
OMG that was awesome. Love the feathers thing.

Author's Response: It was fun to write. Thank you.
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