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Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008 5:02 pm
Emotionally painful - for John, for me as the reader, and I'm assuming for you as the writer. Thanks for pushing through.

Author's Response: It was. Thank you
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
21 Nov 2007 11:49 am
*eep* Very dark place for John there. This was a great little insight into his trust issues and the sheer level of work Rodney's got ahead of him to get back into John's good books.

Laura.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
12 Oct 2007 3:58 pm
::Hugs John::. You've done a great job conveying just how much John's been hurt by Rodney breaking his trust, how it's affected his ability to trust any of his friends. You might want to make a note about it being a Trinity tag, as I didn't realise 'til I read another review and spent most of it wondering what Rodney had done and what the situation was.

Laura.
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Reviewer: FallenPride (Signed)
12 Oct 2007 12:34 am
This is what I thought John might have felt after Trinity. Because he trusted Rodney, trusted him not just to be right (because John would be willing to accept Rodney being wrong), but to not absue the trsut John placed in him. And that's unfortunately what Rodney had done. But life in Pegasus - in Atlantis especailly - doesn't offer you th chance to really, honestly, never trust someone again when you depend on them every day to keep you alive, to keep you safe, to save you when you need to be saved - even when you don't know you need saving.

Thanks for sharing this. You put a lot of that hurt, a lot of that anger, and bitterness in to such a small piece. It was lovely in the bitter-sweet sense.
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
09 Oct 2007 2:07 am
What did Rodney do that was so bad that John feels such dis-trust? Feeling well conveyed in such a short fic.

Author's Response: Doranda. This was set right after Trinity (2x06)
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