Awesome plot to get the boys to kiss! The exploding barn is very nicely random. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviews For Blue Touchpaper, Green Bees
Reviewer: LilithSeraphim (Signed)
15 Oct 2007 5:41 pm
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
10 Oct 2007 11:24 am
lol, that was great. Love the whole barn and fireworks...so Rodney and John to end up in such and odd situation.
Author's Response: Thank you! Any excuse for the boys to see sparks...
Author's Response: Thank you! Any excuse for the boys to see sparks...
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Reviewer: Madison (Signed)
10 Oct 2007 7:45 am
As usual, you have the most amazing way with words--not only do you beautifully convey the scene (I can see it in crystal clear detail) but the voices of the characters are dead on. The summary paragraph where you describe the incidental details of what is happening in little asides is an understated gem and the 'silence' in Rodney's hands--that is just awesome. Perfect. Seriously.
Author's Response: Wow - thank you! It's such a slight piece that what you say seems very flattering! I have to admit that I love Rodney's hands and jumped at the chance to find a metaphor for describing them - I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Wow - thank you! It's such a slight piece that what you say seems very flattering! I have to admit that I love Rodney's hands and jumped at the chance to find a metaphor for describing them - I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks again!
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