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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
20 Oct 2007 7:20 pm
*Sniff* Poor John, I could just picture him wasting away in his grief! And poor Rodney, but bravo for him for surviving! :D
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
20 Oct 2007 3:30 pm
This was very touching. It was heartbreaking to see John so lost and I was angry that Carter didn't even attempt to send a rescue/recovery party, but I think she's learnt her lesson now. Yay for Teyla and Ronon looking after John and yay for happy endings.

Laura.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
19 Oct 2007 8:19 pm
Good for Teyla, Ronon and Lorne. Carter has a lot to think about being in Pegasus and remembering Jack and Daniel is the first lesson. :)
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
19 Oct 2007 5:58 pm
Nicely written. I like how you told the story from the POV of Teyla. Very emotional for all. I love that he got ZPM, considering.
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Reviewer: angellec (Signed)
19 Oct 2007 5:46 pm
That was a great gift on a long day! Extremely good,very much in keeping with Teyla's personality and John and Rodney were right on.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
19 Oct 2007 4:44 pm
You have a good idea, but if you could flush the begining out and show us what happens from the begining instead of telling us, you'll have a much better story. I think reading about what happened as it occurrs and reading about John's downfall and Carter's decision and thier conflict would bring lots of angst and emotion to the great idea you have.
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