Reviews For Par for the Course

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Reviewer: zillah975 (Signed)
09 Sep 2008 11:38 pm
I love this (and not just 'cause I'm right there with Ronon on the mini-golf thing). You manage the fish-out-of-water thing really skillfully -- a lot of the time they ping my embarrassment squick, but not this one.

Now, on to the next!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that the story worked for you, especially since I'd thought hard about how Ronon might react to Earth and all its weirdness.
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Reviewer: MajorClanger (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2008 9:53 pm
That was lovely - I could picture the look on Sheppard's face when Dex got the knife out.

Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Starfoozle (Signed)
06 Aug 2008 7:38 am
This is absolutely great. I love how Ronon doesn't recognize some of the faux pas on Earth, and the way he and Shep (quite literally) played off each other. The ending absolutely cracked me up, too. I'd love to see more Shep/Dex fics like this! Good work. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm delighted you enjoyed the story!
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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
16 Jan 2008 2:19 am
I laughed all the way through. Very sexy.

Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing this story; I'm glad it amused you to read!
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
25 Oct 2007 1:23 am
Hilarious!! I loved it! I would also love to hear some more about Ronon's experiences on Earth, if you are ever so inclined. Just in case, I'll put the story on my favorites ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'm pleased you liked Ronon's reactions enough that you'd like to see more of his experiences on Earth. (I do have a couple of stories that follow this one in mind, though most of the action is on Atlantis rather than Earth.)
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Oct 2007 12:20 am
Heeee. This was fun, but with enough little moments of unease, frustration and screaming kids to give it an edge too.


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for screaming kids, the idiot who tried to scare his date the last time I played mini golf proved unexpectedly useful. :)
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