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Reviewer: Ladeppo (Signed)
07 Dec 2007 2:32 pm
I like it, the idea of Carson and Laura.
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 1:44 pm
That was really great!

You said something about a sequel? When? Does she tell Carson? Is the baby on Earth? Does Cadman visit Carson's family?

Sequel, pleeease!!!

Author's Response: I am writing the sequel now. All will be revealed. :) Thanks for reading!
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 12:41 am
Your handle on the characters is excellent. This could easily fit into the actually episode, and I love Rodney's paronoid stupidity. This story ended wayyyyyy too soon. I always just glance quickly at stories, but you really made me slow down and read everything. Damn, it. Just give me more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love to know I got the characters down. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Oct 2007 11:40 pm
Aw, how cute! I love it that Laura could tell Rodney, even after being in his head. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks!
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007 11:37 pm
THE END!?!?!??! Oh, no you don't! I am seriously screaming at the computer right now! You sit your butt right back down at the keyboard and get working! How does Carson respond? Does Laura stay on Atlantis? What about when Carson says they aren't together late in the series? What about when Carson . . . and Sunday . . . and the sad bagpipes . . .

God, just keep writing!!!!

Author's Response: I am writing, I promise! I have set aside my other story in place of this bunny. It's hopping just fine.
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