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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
16 Nov 2007 4:18 pm
Yay. I'm glad they both got passed the other being an ass. I loved how their friends stepped in to keep Evan from leaving before John got there. I especially liked Chuck's part in it :).

Laura.

Author's Response: :-) I battled with this. I knew that it couldn't just be John and Evan, I knew someone else had to step in and Carson was the natural choice. Still, Evan was assoholic, so I needed someone who could "outrank" him.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
13 Nov 2007 10:46 am
Yay! A happy ending! I loved Chuck's role in this.

Author's Response: Thanks...I thought Chuck was funny. My favorite part is when he lets out his "audible sigh"!
In order to fix the hurt...
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
07 Nov 2007 11:00 pm
Youch. I look forward to seeing what happens before and after this.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
07 Nov 2007 2:16 pm
Oh, this is far too distressing to be complete. Someone needs to give John a hug and someone else needs to stop Evan from leaving and send him in John's direction.

Splendidly angsty, even if it didn't explain how the situation came about. Possibly that even helped the angst along, because it was all so out of the blue and contextless (I may have just invented a word there :/ ).

Laura.

Author's Response: I actually pulled this out of another story when it changed direction. However, I thought that the lack contextual clues made the fight that much more intense. I had intended this to be my one sappiless ending. But, you may be right. There may need to be some resolution.
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