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Reviewer: LilithSeraphim (Signed)
12 Nov 2007 5:19 am
So, after having bronzed those random lines in "it began in may..." I belive I will bronze this entire fic and build a shrine for it, making daily sacrifices of white-chocolate cookies and coffee candies.

Very stream-of-conciousness, and very painful to read. Sheppard had gone more than a little insane in his grief imo. His promises (the white picket fence!) and his reason for not giving them Earth were powerful, especially in the rambling way you set it up.

I wish I knew a little about the situation. "Earth" made me think of the Wraith, or the Replicators, but it is a great mystery...

Author's Response: Well, really, this fic *loves* coffee candies and white-chocolate cookies. It takes after me. :D And yes, okay, he is a tiny bit more than just a little insane, but it's too be expected, I think. rnrnIt's sort of a mystery to me as well, if that means anything. Though, I have some ideas. :DrnThanks!
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
11 Nov 2007 10:01 pm
I can't even find the words, at least not atm...but I didn't not want to leave something to know that I read amazing I am depressed.

Author's Response: Well I certainly didn't mean to make you depressed. But thank you anyway! :D
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Nov 2007 9:07 pm
OMG! That is the sadest story I have ever read. That was truely brutal. ***** Five stars. Excellent. Wonderful, terrible, sad, angsty, ugh!!!! Please, this is a wonderful platform for so many possible stories. I would very, very much enjoy reading this same situation from someone else's perspective. Again, excellent read!

Author's Response: Oh thank you. Muchly. I was afraid it was perhaps too much angst, but, eh. And you never know, I have about a dozen ideas branching off this... so.
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Reviewer: SnakeMistress (Signed)
11 Nov 2007 8:21 pm
sorry wrong hate when that happens. loved this one definitly a wonder anghst. great job

Author's Response: It's okay! And thanks.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007 3:35 pm
*sniff* that's so sad...

Author's Response: I know, I sort of feel guilty I put Sheppard through so much. heh.
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