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Reviewer: athrun yuy (Signed)
13 Jul 2010 9:37 pm
GRRR this is why i don't read incomplete stories. Love it too much and can't wait for the rest. please update soon.
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Alinea (Signed)
26 Apr 2008 7:18 pm
This is a very special story, I know the muse can be a bit stubborn sometimes but it would be wonderful to have a little bit more?????
You are such a great writer,please give up the day job and write full time!!!!!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous)
10 Apr 2008 5:11 am
i love it i hope you will update soon
Chapter 6
Reviewer: Jayne (Anonymous)
29 Jan 2008 3:09 am
Please finish this story!!!
Chapter 6
Reviewer: SGARocks (Anonymous)
23 Jan 2008 6:02 am
More please!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: tricky1379 (Anonymous)
09 Jan 2008 12:06 pm
this is really gud... please update soon!!!!
Chapter 6
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
28 Dec 2007 7:27 am
"Only Sheppard could interpret a 'more, more,' noise as 'get away from me you homo freak' noise." Love it! What a great line. I can't wait till the next chapter, this is so good.
Chapter 6
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Dec 2007 8:05 am
Only Sheppard could interpret a 'more, more,' noise as 'get away from me you homo freak' noise.

I just about died laughing when I read this part.

One little edit note: on the last long paragraph of this chapter, it starts

The only problem Rodney could foresee was that he terrible at relationships...

shouldn't there be a "was" before the word "terrible"?

But otherwise, wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more!
Chapter 6
Reviewer: Sue H (Anonymous)
26 Dec 2007 5:49 am
This is such a great story. I'm loving the pacing of the self-revelation (for both of the boys).
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
26 Dec 2007 1:52 am
Yay. I'm glad Rodney finally got to the bottom of what's been bothering John, even if it was a torturous route, with much changing of the subject and distracting teasing banter. I loved the wake up scene and Rodney's pleasure at having John in bed with him- lovely image. I also liked some of the other touching moments such as John revealing all the epi-pens he and the team carry, or John fetching chocolate for Rodney and Rodney sharing it with him :). Here's hoping Rodney finds the way to get through John's freak out with the minimum of fuss.

Chapter 6
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
26 Dec 2007 12:43 am
Gotta love Rodney. :) He is so going to come with a way to get John.
Chapter 6
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Dec 2007 4:46 am
Ack, I was so engrossed in the story that I didn't even realize that I had gotten to the last chapter. It has been great, I hope that you are able to update soon. You are doing an amazing job with your exploration of both John and Rodney and them together. Can't wait for more.
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Dec 2007 4:25 am
I love it..."kicking and screaming"...that would be so funny to see in an episode!
Chapter 4
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Dec 2007 1:48 am
they are so cute...
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Dec 2007 1:23 am
I see the beginnings of a beautiful relationship, written so well...
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
19 Dec 2007 11:38 pm
I love the way that you portrayed the gentle side of Sheppard, and how you have Rodney attributing it to his drug induced sweet. Great start for a first fic.
Chapter 1
Reviewer: effertz (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2007 4:47 am
I am really enjoying this. Keep writing.
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Betty M (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2007 4:41 am
I so love huge stories with build-up and angst. The characterizations are great and I can't wait to see how things come out. I'll wait until the tale is complete, tho, before sending the link to my friend (she doesn't have enuf patience to wait... *sigh* )
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Jaessamine (Anonymous)
11 Dec 2007 6:05 pm
I'm really enjoying the slow build up of John and Rodney's relationship, nicely written, thanks :)
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
10 Dec 2007 7:02 pm
It started out a bit rocky and I wondered whether they'd be in the right frame of mind for their talk, but I was happy to find that things settled down quickly. Both stories were sad, yet it was great to see how supportive and understanding they were as each man told his tale. I loved the ending too- you can't go wrong with a bit of snuggling after emotional upheaval :).

Chapter 5