OMG. I cannot express how wonderful this was. My husband is pissed at me for reading for 3 hours ;) I absolutely love what you did with Lavvyn's universe. I thought you did a great job with expressing things from John's POV.
Reviewer: PGNPXI (Anonymous)
04 Dec 2007 5:17 am
That was so cool! I loved how you added on to the plot and the details were totally fascinating! John being an A.I. on the run from the SGC was just really, ridiculously, neat!