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Reviewer: Aelfgyfu (Anonymous)
14 Dec 2007 4:16 pm
Well done: this tag both caps off "Trinity" and "Epiphany." It must have been a terrible shock indeed for John to come back, and he is blaming Rodney at the start, even if he doesn't mean to, until Carson makes him face the question directly. I like that Teyla respects John's need for some time to himself. And, of course, Rodney has no idea what either of them needs, but John gets them both back on track.

Author's Response: The relationships are what fascinate me about SGA. I'm thrilled to know you think I did them justice. Thank you!
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Reviewer: Madison (Signed)
13 Dec 2007 6:36 pm
Excellent fic! I loved the way you touched on a lot of major points that sort of got glossed over in canon. You did a great job in conveying John's POV as well as his motivations for certain things (disappointment in not being able to have Rodney's success with Arcturus to cancel out his guilt in awakening the Wraith--that was perfect!. I loved the simplicity of Ronon's reaction to the situation as well as the team interaction here--but I especially loved the section where John is envisioning how the dinner will go and what everyone's reactions will be--you nailed that perfectly! I enjoyed this story very much--thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: I think filling in the holes left by canon is the job of fanfiction, so I'm glad I could fulfil my role. :) I'd always been puzzled by John's reaction in Trinity, I never thought he was the person most wrong (I thought that was Radek) but this made sense to me. I have such a problem writing Ronon, I particularly glad you don't think I short changed him. I love the team.rnrnThank you so much for making me so welcome on my first fic here.
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Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingone (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2007 8:07 am
Fabulous. One of my absolutely favorite tags to this episode. The voices ring so true. BRAVO!!!

Author's Response: I work on the voices very hard so this is wonderful to hear! And your favorite tag when there are so many great ones out there? That's amazing praise! Thank you so much!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
13 Dec 2007 5:03 am
Great character piece. I liked getting some of the fallout from John's six months that wasn't shown in canon. Of course it would take a while to reconcile the six months/two hours thing and I liked how you handled it, especially the symbolic beard removal and John seeing himself in the mirror again.

I enjoyed John's talks with Teyla and Rodney, particularly the latter. I liked how John's irritation at having to deal with Rodney's issues on top of his own actually turned into the thing that made it all fit again. I'm also glad the cleared the air over those fairly major events and that their friendship came out intact.

Laura.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed John's coping with the time disparity. I actually took that from my husband. He wore a mustache for years and had to shave it off for a theatrical part. He said once he shaved it off he saw the person he used to be under there. I had to use that!rnrnI have a hard time leaving the team at odds, so i'm unlikely to ever do it. :) Thank you very much for the kind words.
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