Reviews For Making a Splash

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Reviewer: zillah975 (Signed)
09 Sep 2008 11:47 pm
This one made me laugh a lot. :) And also awwww! Poor John!


Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing this one - I'm glad it made you laugh!
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Dec 2007 7:33 am
Okay, I get the Denver thing now. Yeah, you have to drive fast up there, or you'll be run over! You are slowly but surely becoming one of my favorite authors. Keep up the good work! Ooo, this thought just came to me. What if John took Ronon to the museum? Shows him all the dino bones and ancient cavemen? That might be fun to explore. I can just see Ronon standing still next to a caveman and the jumping out and scaring a troop of girl scouts!

Author's Response: It's good to hear the Denver thing works in the context of the previous story, thanks. Heh - the museum could be funny. I can see John thinking the dinosaurs are cool, and Ronon being completely unimpressed because he's killed things scarier than that. ;)
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
17 Dec 2007 4:25 am
That was just as entertaing as the first one! :) I think Ronon is flirting. But John does have a point, Ronon is usually very direct. I greatly look forwar to more.!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I also think Ronon is usually very direct, but I could see him testing the water a bit to be sure of how John would react - after which, of course, I'd expect him to be quite direct. ;)
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
16 Dec 2007 7:29 pm
Haha. Poor John.

Author's Response: Poor John indeed - but hopefully he'll figure it out. ;)
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
16 Dec 2007 1:37 pm
More yes? There better be more. A lot more. Hate to nit pick (but that is what I do), but why are they in Denver on leave? I understand the leave part, but what is wrong with the Springs? Personally, and it is your story and not mine, but I think it would make more sense for this to take place on Fort Carson, Peterson Airforce Base, or Colorado Springs. I admit, I am biased. Or maybe there is more story as to why they are in Denver. I demand more.

Author's Response: There's more. ;) I see that you found the next story already, and I'm working on the one after that. There was also a story that came before this one; I'm not sure if you saw it, but if not and you're interested, it's Par for the Course. As for why Denver, in the earlier story Sheppard was sick of being cooped up under the Mountain, and Colorado Springs just didn't seem quite far enough away. He wanted to drive first, so Denver it was. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the story, and I'm glad you were interested enough in it to take time to wonder about Denver and ask!
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