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Reviewer: Ansku (Signed)
20 Feb 2009 10:31 pm
Cute :)

Author's Response: Thanks!
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Reviewer: AliCat (Anonymous)
23 Nov 2008 6:03 am
I have a problem with relationships in the chain of command - military family - so I generally avoid Sheppard/Lorne unless the story has been recommended by someone, but since I liked the inital piece I decided to keep going. I really appreciated the way the characters acknowledged and started to work through the legitimate concerns.

Kinda weird chain of command bothers me when 2 guys doing the wild thing doesn't, but hey nobody's perfect. :0)

Author's Response: Yeah, the chain of command thing is probably one of the hardest things to get around with this pairing, because it can't be handwaved away nearly as easily as DADT. I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Dec 2007 1:18 am
Yay! Loved the first meeting and their easy interaction, so I was sad to see chain of command getting in the way. I felt a bit bad for Evan getting the mixed signals, but he knew John by that point, so at least he had some understanding of how John's mind worked and how he struggled with the deep and meaningful. I'm glad they decided to go for it :).


Author's Response: It's a bit odd, but one thing I love about this pairing is the chain of command issue. It's a lot harder to get around than with McShep, there's there's only "Don't Ask, Don't Tell" in the way. That it more fun to play with how they get over their normal inhibitions.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
20 Dec 2007 5:23 am
This was so great! I loved how John and Evan met. I loved how you included Daniel. I love how Landry was so pissed he locked Lorne up for a bit.I love how Evan handled John when he was drunk, and I loved that John left a note behind for Evan.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really proud of it.
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