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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 5:12 pm
Soooo, was that explosion a set up to get all the key players distracted, or was it simply bad luck? More great Teyla/John interaction and, while it seemed unlikely John would get away (that would be too easy and you're mean to him *g*), it didn't stop me cheering him on as he took out as many as possible before he finally went down.

Laura.

Author's Response: Just crappy luck. Plain and simple. And he HAD to put up a fight. Had to!
Chapter 20
Reviewer: ranlynn (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2008 5:04 pm
Fear not, dear readers. To paraphrase Monty Python, "He ain't dead yet." :) Umm, maybe I should have left off the "yet"....

Yes indeed, one should not agitate the inmat...uhm...readers.

Author's Response: A ravening horde by another name.... ;) If the door bell rings, and I smell smoke, the roomie gets to answer....
Chapter 26
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 5:03 pm
I'm glad Lorne's out, but not glad of the reasons- more scheming on Kolya's part :(. I could see why Rodney was worried about losing the Carson he knows, but at the same time, Michael can't be kept a prisoner forever and he can't be released, so what other choice is there? Interesting chat between John and Teyla too, some intriguing revelations made.

Laura.
Chapter 19
Reviewer: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2008 2:16 pm
*giggle* I love what Carson did to Chaya. Technically he didn't kill her, just made sure she wouldn't get in the way. And afterwards, well, no one will be directly responsible, it was all a series of unfortunate mistakes and miscommunication. How sad. *gives fake look of remorse* Oh well! And John rocked! I can't wait to see what he does. Okay, I actually can and will wait, partially because your poor fingers probably are cramping by now from all your typing, and you are probably starting to wonder why your screen is swimming. Poor writer. *sends virtual cake* And the whole busy on reader's side. Four classes starting and a fifth with a test tomorrow. >.< I have a computer now though! *purrs* This has been the first piece of fanfiction read on my new computer. Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response: Oooo, a nice christening for your new computer. Cool. Virtual cake, mmmmmmm. And I'm almost caught up with the posts with what hasn't been written yet. Yup, will be a LATE night tonight.... More cake....
Chapter 25
Reviewer: zaftig (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 6:18 am
Ooh, pretty cold of Carson, but I guess that he's been driven to the edge. Glad that they didn't catch Rodney (good idea to go to John's room). Berserker John is very cool. Looking forward to more (must finish review before going to work! Nice start to day, thanks).

Author's Response: Yoir welcome! And thanks! My beta reader thinks I was too *easy* on Chaya....
Chapter 25
Reviewer: scifi_lemon (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2008 6:08 pm
Another great chapter! Question, though: if John's in panther form, why is he walking on two legs instead of four? And why no mention of a tail? I'm very dissapointed. ;]

Author's Response: He's still upright, still has hands - he's a mix of human and panther now. His legs have reformed to handle both upright and 4-legged locomotion if need be. A mixture of the best of both species, if you will.... No tail, though. Well, um, let me rephrase that. NICE tail. ;)
Chapter 24
Reviewer: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2008 5:42 pm
*waits eagerly* Come on. Here messy, messy, messy. I wonder just what Carson will do. He is a doctor, so he could be planning any number of things. I imagine she won't drop dead on the spot though. Not right away any way. Have I mentioned I love fast updates? And long stories? Because I do.

Author's Response: Hmm, even though I haven't finished the story, I may have to post 25.... We'll see how far I get on the chapter I'm currently working on, and how much sleep deprivation I'm willing to suffer tonight. ;)
Chapter 24
Reviewer: captdeb (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2008 5:36 pm
Oh my goodness! I love this story, and I love the fact that you post so regularly. I'm really excited that certain people are about to get their comeuppance. I really hope that a few of Kolya's men have a change of heart, that would be really good storytelling. Thank you!

Author's Response: Ford will. Has to get knocked in the noggin', but he will. :)
Chapter 24
Reviewer: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 10:35 pm
Kolya's gonna get it! And ooh boy, it's going to be messy. *smiles evily* They may never find all of Chaya. And I do think that the rebelion is still coming. *waits eagerly* I so needed some good reading. My motherboard died, and it took until now to get to another computer. This was a very nice mood booster. Thanks!

Author's Response: Welcome! I just wrote the scene - messy doesn't beging to cover it.... :)
Chapter 22
Reviewer: scifi_lemon (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 10:12 pm
Oooh. Were-panther? *squee* That's just...awesome. Why won't the image of John with a black, furry tail get out of my head? :P

Author's Response: And it's such a NICE tail, too..... Ahem. ;)rn
Chapter 22
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 9:54 pm
KOLYA'S GONNA GET IT!!
KOLYA'S GONNA GET IT!!
KOLYA'S GONNA GET IT!!
KOLYA'S GONNA GET IT!!

KOLYA'S GONNA ....uhm, just how many time do we have to keep repeating that? ;)

Author's Response: As many times as ya like. 'Cuz he is.... :)
Chapter 22
Reviewer: spacesplace (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 7:35 pm
Oh wow..Oh WOW!!! Please, let John "play" with Koyla before he (Koyla) gets it? It's not that I'm bloodthirsty....exactly...but he deserves it!!! Such a good story!

Author's Response: Hee. Um, 'play' is a good word.... ;)
Chapter 22
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 2:31 pm
me like

Author's Response: Me thank!
Chapter 22
Reviewer: scifi_lemon! (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 11:26 am
Gah! Why do you do this to me? LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: And it's up!! Thank you, Temaris! You made scifi_lemon!'s day. :)
Chapter 21
Reviewer: scifi_lemon (Anonymous)
18 Jan 2008 9:06 pm
I looked up panthera onca. Now I'm *more* confused. Gah! This story gets better and better along with my need to know what John is!! There needs to be a one on one talk between John and another character where he spills the beans. Please? Update soon, or I will explode and be unable to leave more reviews. :P

Author's Response: Noooooo! Don't 'splode! Those little screen wipes aren't designed to handle that level of ooky.... Soon. Soon. John's true form will be revealed. Um, under duress, that is.
Chapter 20
Reviewer: spacesplace (Anonymous)
18 Jan 2008 3:56 pm
This is so very very good!! I check this site about 4 x a day for new chapters. And the "panthera ona" clue.... I thought this might be where you were heading with the "mint tea" comment!! So very, very good!

Author's Response: Ah, kinda like me checking for reviews....... ;)
Chapter 20
Reviewer: Bouncing Butterballs (Anonymous)
18 Jan 2008 2:01 am
That's awesome! He's an elf! haha ...sorta...well with those ears? I guess we shoulda guessed ;)
Thanks for the new chapter...

Author's Response: Only an eighth elf.... ;) Maybe. Kinda sorta possibly......
Chapter 19
Reviewer: scifi_lemon (Anonymous)
17 Jan 2008 7:07 pm
Gah! Royal bloodline? Houses? *brain explodes* I NEED to know what he is!! I'm dying here. Please, let us know soon? Please?

Author's Response: Here's a hint: look up panthera onca.... :)
Chapter 19
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
16 Jan 2008 2:08 pm
Glad to see something get under Kolya's facade. Glad to see John still defiant, even if it did get him a few more bruises. Nice to finally *see* Teyla after all the veiled references, too. I can't wait to see what's next.

Laura.
Chapter 18
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
16 Jan 2008 1:58 pm
As far as I see that opening scene- leave the weird, creepy people to be all weird and creepy with each other- safer for everyone else that way. And anyway, maybe they'll irritate each other enough that they kill each other ;). Good news about Teyla and that they know where John will be. Also good to know that Kolya's messed up with Lorne and has done more to turn opinion against him than, I assume, send some sort of message to behave.

Laura.

Author's Response: Oh, there will be a message to behave. Trust me. Not a pretty one, either.... But that's for a future chapter.
Chapter 17
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