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Reviewer: calysar (Signed)
27 May 2008 10:15 am
love it, pleeeeeease write more!
Chapter 3
Reviewer: fififolle (Signed)
02 Feb 2008 3:23 pm
I love the way you've trapped Kavanagh off world in a snowy alien outpost, with the prospect of drinking Simpson under the table! ;) Bring it on!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
01 Feb 2008 2:59 pm
Saw that coming. Ritual sacrifice resumed. *sigh*

Author's Response: Sorry you found that element of the plot too cliche or not original enough - though really getting true originality in plot is hard. The reasons for the sacrifice are a bit more involved historically than the random let's kill people to appease the Gods, even if it seems that way, but I understand if you don't wish to stick around to read anymore of the story. Though I would hope the one disappointing plot point doesn't detract from the character or action aspects of the story.
Chapter 2
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