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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
14 Jan 2008 6:22 pm
Wow, that is a great piece and so very much I how I think that it would truly be, at least in the beginning. Great job.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
10 Jan 2008 2:16 am
Sweet and tender. :)

Author's Response: Excellent, thank you.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
10 Jan 2008 1:28 am
Lovely. So very sensual, and the rarity, the emotional connection pushed this beyond simply being hot. I can really see Rodney being that focused when he has the time and the desire to. I can also see it taking a bit of work to get John to give up his control and simply feel. I think the fact that it doesn't happen that way very often makes it all the more special.


Author's Response: Thank you very much - sensual was what I was aiming for so I'm glad that worked.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
09 Jan 2008 11:23 pm
Oh, wow. That's amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.
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