Reviews For Desperation

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 12:35 am
I liked the way you worded it at the beginning, giving a bit of a red herring as to who was injured. Rodney did a great job keeping up the pressure and dealing with the psycho. It was a close call and I'm so glad it all turned out okay.


Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to put a few twists at first first with Rodney, then with their team mate to try something new and add to the tension.
Reviewer: mdime (Signed)
20 Jan 2008 4:53 am

This was a great story with an intriguing twist. I really like what it reveals about Rodney, about John, and about Team; they have all changed each other so much, and are all so tightly bound to one another. It is nice to see it acknowledged that John's devotion is not one way -- that Rodney will reciprocate in kind, doing anything necessary, even when it hurts/is hard.

Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you..I wanted something frantic, while showing Rodney's courage, and determinedness to help John no matter what. I agree, they are very, tightly bound to one another. Pllus I couldn't resist a stalker type story.
Reviewer: KC (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 4:00 pm
Nice, nice, nice!

Author's Response: Thanks
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