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Reviewer: Moogiesgirl77 (Signed)
17 May 2011 10:24 am
Excellent, thank you.
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Reviewer: angelwings (Signed)
18 Jun 2008 7:28 pm
:0 really nice look at ronon's character. good whump too! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! This is still a fav!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
21 Jan 2008 6:47 pm
Poor John; it's really not a good day for him! Not a great day for Ronon either, but I'm glad he succeeded, for his own sense of worth as much as for John. This was a great look at Ronon's thoughts and self-opinion.

Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted to do something simple but layered with Ronon.
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Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2008 10:34 am
Ribs crack anyway when you do CPR, and you find your landmark from the xiphoid process at the bottom of the sternum, not by counting ribs.

Other than that, I like the way you talked about the capabilities of Ronon's hands. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip, my medical beta didn't mention this, but I may take a look at it later....Ronon might have a hard time remembering a word like "xiphoid". I had a friend whose ribs were not cracked so I know it doesn't happen all the time.
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