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Reviewer: bel (Anonymous)
28 Sep 2008 9:46 pm
That was so cute and funny! I now have the best mental image of them all covered in paint, beads and feathers. XD Looking forward to the next part.
Pluperfect
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
04 Sep 2008 10:01 pm
Excellent chapter. This is really quite enthralling.
Imperfect
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
10 Mar 2008 11:34 pm
Another great update! I really like how things are developing, though I shutter to imagine the timeline impact caused by death of that guard.

I hope when they finally return close to their time that it will be good enough, because otherwise, they have to somehow prevent Radek from having a weapon set to kill, unless, of course, that was a requirement for "their" timeline to exist. ;-)

Thank you for writing this story. I look forward to the next update.
Accusative and Infinitive
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
10 Mar 2008 12:53 am
Excellent chapter. I am an avid follower of this story.
Accusative and Infinitive
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
31 Jan 2008 8:20 pm
That was some update! I was completely thrown by Genii being in the city since only Earth could connect while it hibernated & the Alterans didn't interbreed until they returned to Earth so no one with the ATA would exist in Pegasus. Once it became clear that they were jumping between realities too I started to wonder what was so different in that reality's timeline that led to such significant differences.

I really enjoyed Idos and actually felt badly for Kolya, though he was a bit too Vulcan-like for me. I was very disappointed by Rodney's behavior. I hope he opens his eyes & realizes how rude he was to Idos.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: The whole point of alternate universes is that if you accept there are infinite numbers, infinite possibilities are there. Anything could have made the change. The whole point is we don't know what made each difference. That's far too much knowledge that the team don't have. (If they knew how to fix time they would!)

There will be developments. A few jumps down the line... ;)
Aorist
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
29 Jan 2008 4:36 pm
This is fantastic. Your characterizations are completely believable and profound.

Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnWe plan to have more parts up soon. *grins*
Aorist
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2008 10:33 am
Wow! What an interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take it. I feel sorry for Col. Sumner and his people. If they continue to exist, they will have a serious problem without Maj. Sheppard.

Author's Response: Do they continue to exist or does every change in timeline wipe out all other possibilities?rnrnWe like to think not. Otherwise we kill all of reality several times over before the end of the story!
Deponent
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