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Reviewer: sgakaz (Anonymous)
06 Mar 2008 2:22 am
I got a little panicky and though I'd missed a warning for a moment Phew! happy ending in the end.
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Reviewer: Ciar (Signed)
24 Jan 2008 10:12 am
I love your idea of using another character to let us see Rodney and John's relationship. The glimpse she got of them changing into 'team' mode during the robbery was brilliant; it shows how effective they are and how much Rodney has improved in 'combat' situations. Your character voices were spot on - very true to the originals :) I really enjoyed your original character Annabelle - she was really cool and really well written!
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Reviewer: the_cephalopod (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 10:15 am
Lovely - really very enjoyable! Thank you. cep xxx
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 8:02 am
Nice, very nice story I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 6:39 am
LOL...a very inventive story line...very nicely done.
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Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2008 1:13 am
Aww... so cute! And of course she is a slasher.... ::grin::

I love the fics like this... where they're back on Earth and something mundane goes wrong. Thank you so much!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2008 1:07 am
Ouch for the vacation on earth not going right. :)
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Reviewer: Twinchy (Signed)
22 Jan 2008 1:02 am
Very interesting ficlet and well written. I loved how you had Annabelle tell the story from her point of view.

Great, she came to visit John in the hospital afterwards. And did I mention how much I adored McKay saving the day, eventually? To perceive it only from the girl's perspective in that deadful situation when she already ducked behind the counter, was a really brilliant move IMHO.

Shep's last statement about not leaving the bedroom was hilarious!
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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008 11:18 pm
Bizzaro opening and then it picks up steam. Loved it - especially the last bits.
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