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Reviewer: dearjoan (Anonymous)
05 Feb 2008 8:42 am
Wow, you put so much into this piece! This is such an intelligent story; I love the way you got into the characters' heads, especially from the Thlemians' perspective! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, the whole point was to strip our team down, see what makes them tick and what makes them human.
Reviewer: SGARocks (Anonymous)
27 Jan 2008 8:00 am
I loved your story. Great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
27 Jan 2008 12:29 am
Excellent fic! While I could see why the Thlemians would want to be sure about the team's motives, there's no way to justify the way they went about it! John endured so much pain, physical and mental, but it was no picnic for his team having to watch his pain. Rodney, Ronon and Teyla's own circumstances were tailored perfectly, which was great for the story, but not for them ;). I'm glad Teyla managed to make Orate think, made him confused and made him doubt. I'm glad they're finally going home, hopefully to lock the address out of the computers as soon as the gate shuts behind them!


Author's Response: Thank you, I almost never posted this one anywhere because I was so unsure about it, but after much debate I did. It really was about the Team, the aspects that made up their psyche and their bonds. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Philly (Anonymous)
25 Jan 2008 12:39 am
You are a very talented writer. Well Done.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.