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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
04 Feb 2008 12:05 pm
Yep this is your sequal. John is dead, and this is the afterlife. I think the mirror confuses me because I don't know if he is in his bathroom alone or if he is in a dance studio or something. This is great how you just give snippetts. You've really hooked your audience.

Author's Response: Well I wanted it to be a drabble so I couldn't put too much detail in it. I really like how it turned out, much better than it sounded in my head. And Thank you!
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
04 Feb 2008 11:22 am
Ok, that was totally unexpected and I loved it!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I really liked how this turned out.
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Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
03 Feb 2008 11:41 pm
You know, now that I think about it, John's hair really *does* dance! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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