Reviews For Heavy Shoulders

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
20 Feb 2008 11:04 am
Lovely story. I'm glad John's got Rodney to pull him out of his thoughts when needed and I loved how great Rodney was at doing it :).

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Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
08 Feb 2008 7:05 am
Loved the story.

I liked the way that it was Rodney grounding John. This was a great story and very believable.

John has always come over as a character who keeps a lot inside and this captured it well.

The part where you said that John had trashed his room came over well too. For me this worked as I could imagine him doing this rather that talking to someone about it. It also added a nice dynamic to the realtionship that he had with Rodney because he made John promise to talk to him.

This was a well thought out, thought provoking story. Thanks very much.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
08 Feb 2008 3:04 am
I agree with Dementi. I love how you have their dynamics. :3
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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
08 Feb 2008 12:43 am
Nice take on John's reaction to the situation. I like how you had Rodney ground him and how John described how Rodney made him feel. What a great little insight!
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