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Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
11 Feb 2008 4:07 pm
This is a lovely story.

I have to say that I really don't like Kavanagh as portrayed in the series. BUT I find myself admitting that I really am warming to the guy as you portray him.

You have captured the Kavanagh that was in the series. The holier than though know it all really comes through. Then you find a way to make him a hero. I love the way that you manage to give him a compassionate side and make him think of others. Darn it you've really made like the guy!!!!!

I also like the way that you handle the relationship between Chuck and Will. It really comes over well.

I also like the way that Chuck is scared of meeting Wills mum. I found that quite funny.

Thank you for taking Kavanagh from a 2 dimensional person we like to hate to a fully rounded personality with redeeming qualities.

Author's Response: Hi there! Wow. What wonderful feedback :) Who could imagine Kavanagh could have this effect? ;) I really appreciate your kind feedback :D
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Reviewer: Lady Taevyn (Anonymous)
11 Feb 2008 3:08 pm
Love this!!! You have the best handle of Kavanaugh's voice and inner workings
You manage to round him out which for a character with such little screen time is a Huge deal. This was wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed. What a nice review :)
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