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Reviewer: daydreaming readhead (Signed)
23 Nov 2011 1:32 pm
Oh, I quite like this. I'd been wondering what "love" would look like, especially after Rodney sent John's name to him. This entire story is beautifully written, but I think you handled that detail especially well.
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Reviewer: bainst (Signed)
14 May 2010 9:03 am
I've read this story three times, and each time I tear up at 6. It's so bittersweet.
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Reviewer: Emeraldsword (Anonymous)
04 Aug 2009 7:14 pm
Oh, I really liked this. That last line especially just killed me. I also like the fact that the condition never really went away or got explained, it just faded out somewhat. Really sensitive and thought provoking - lovely job.
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Reviewer: Ppleater (Signed)
27 May 2009 2:12 am
I like this a lot. Seriously.
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Reviewer: Bad Wolf (Anonymous)
21 Aug 2008 7:56 am
Gorgeous sequel. Lovely imagery throughout. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewer: encchick (Signed)
12 Jul 2008 3:41 pm
OMG. That was just beautiful! "John picked it up, and opened it. And it whispered, Love. His name fit perfectly inside."

Lost it right effin' there. What a perfect little story. Thanks for sharing it.
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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
07 May 2008 9:46 pm
Lovely, especially the very end, there -- a pefect companion piece to the one lavvyan wrote! There's a lump in my throat -- maybe I have Logopetria too! XD
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
06 May 2008 12:56 am
Awwwwwwwwwww. *cries with happiness*
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Reviewer: Ellex (Signed)
15 Feb 2008 1:40 am
This is excellent - Lavvyan's story needed completion, and you finished the story admirably and vividly.
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 12:38 pm
That soooo sweet!!! Beautiful.
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Reviewer: eponine (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 10:31 am
I absolutely adore Atlantean fairy tales, and this (along with it's companion piece) is quite possible the best I've ever read.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 9:47 am
Way cool! Very good...those are some word to share with you. Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewer: FeDhu (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 8:39 am
Very nice.
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
14 Feb 2008 7:34 am
Ah! That was very sweet with a touch of angst. Nicely done. I'm still curious about what happened to Rodney, but I liked how you handled it.
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Reviewer: Jaessamine (Anonymous)
14 Feb 2008 7:32 am
That's nice! Followed on really well too and I love the ending :) Thanks.
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Reviewer: madrabbit5 (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 6:04 am
This is absolutely beautiful. Thanks to you and lavvyan both for this pair of gems.
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Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
14 Feb 2008 5:20 am
This was so lovely. You truly did the first story justice.
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Reviewer: Dar (Anonymous)
14 Feb 2008 5:19 am
Jesus, you made me cry. So beautiful though.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
14 Feb 2008 4:22 am
That was wonderful. Thank you for the smile. :)
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