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Reviewer: Sulien (Signed)
29 Sep 2010 11:17 am
"May squick" with no specifics is really not sufficient warning for rape in a story. I was greatly enjoying this story until I was hit between the eyes by the rather descriptive, matter of fact, sentence long rape scene. And no, it doesn't really matter that the scene in question was an induced hallucination. Thanks ever so for the flashbacks.

Author's Response: I'm sure you have long forgotten this comment and I hope long forgotten the story, but I don't check over here and didn't see the comment. I deeply apologize for blindsiding you. I would never want to cause someone a flashback and I didn't think this would. Obviously I was wrong.
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Reviewer: springwoof (Signed)
11 Jul 2009 5:44 pm
very nice! I liked Rodney's blunt negotiation style and I liked the real affection and care of Elizabeth and the team for Rodney. I liked the scene where Elizabeth pointed out that Rodney did *not* act the way the Asurians had shown him in his vision: "You've placed yourself between me and danger several times, Rodney. That's what's real, not whatever you saw." I also liked the "who's the best diplomat" byplay between Teyla & Elizabeth. Very nice interpersonal dynamics overall. Thanks for an enjoyable fic!

Author's Response: Such specific praise from someone whose stories I have always enjoyed is amazingly gratifying! I guess I really should check for comments, shouldn't I? :)
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
03 Jul 2008 4:45 am
Oh, this is beautiful. I especially like that you bring Rodney out of his comfort zone to the point of holding an entire village at gunpoint, and negotiating a settlement that they found acceptable even when the weapons were put away.

Author's Response: I love Rodney being able to do things he doesn't think he's capable of. Not that there is much. :)
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Reviewer: Reflex (Signed)
23 Feb 2008 2:52 am
"We agree to provide you technical expertise if you promise not to do something monumentally stupid with it"

LOL. very nice. Fun story and a great addition to the episode. The team cohesion was wonderful as well :)

Author's Response: this was one of my first attempts to really be funny so I'm thrilled you liked it for the humor. I have trouble writing Ronon and Teyla as well so I'm even happier that this came across as the team fic (with obvious emphasis on Rodney) that it was meant to be. Thanks!
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Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
23 Feb 2008 2:45 am
Great story! Excellent how you brought Rodney 'round to understanding who he is in spite of his aweful fears. Well done!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is like the third rewrite. My beta readers informed me I resolved the whole situation around the campfire in the first two so I'm really happy to hear that the arc worked. Thank you!
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Reviewer: Mrs Roboto (Signed)
22 Feb 2008 10:57 pm
awwww, how adorable ^_^ Loved the ending. Very nice story, good job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the ending. It was hard keeping Rodney in the dark about his own predelictions for so long. Thanks!
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Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
22 Feb 2008 10:19 pm
Excellent story and wonderful resolution. It's a shame real treaties can't be that honest.

Author's Response: Isn't it though? :) I think Rodney essentially bulldozered them. Thanks for the kind words!
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