Reviews For See My City Dead

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Reviewer: Tamda (Anonymous)
11 Jul 2009 4:19 am
Holy. Shit.

You killed them all. Godda...Okay. Now I want to write/read a sequel. A long time in the future, Star Trek, or BSG, find a cityship of unknown design, derelict except for a single active power source. Only one in a city of thousands and thousands of rooms.

And when they pry open the doors, they see what must have been the leaders, or kings... must have been the most important people twined in a single pod.

A dead warior, descicated from vented atmosphere, a fearsome hulk sitting at attention, guarding the pod even in death locked in an obvious pose of wary protection. An empty pod beside the one, choosing to die protecting the pod instead of safety.

Damn I suck too much to do it justice (and don't know much BSG besides it would SO fit the far future element)but I want to see this continued... because such a sacrafice... someone see it, someone know it... someone remember all who died and use the ghost ship to bring hope...

To make one age, one people's sacrafice save humanity a thousand years later.

Author's Response: That sounds like a glorious idea. I'd be thrilled if you wrote it. :)
Reviewer: Twinfetish (Signed)
23 Jun 2009 10:33 pm
Wow... that was... damn. Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Robin Hood (Signed)
25 Mar 2008 7:20 am
Good, really good. And I don't see the slash, unless you wanted it and thin it's there, any way, really really well written.

Author's Response: It's probably more in my head. Or really, really subtle. ;)
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
24 Feb 2008 1:17 am
That is an amazing piece and so fitting with Ronon. He knows what Rodney and John meant to each other in life and would want to be together in death.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)