This is such a cute story! I wonder if you might consider writing something where they're turned into animals while in Atlantis?
Anyway, I thought I'd point out that the second paragraph has a major typo at the end. The last sentence just doesn't make sense.
Good luck writing!
Reviews For The Cat and the Raven
Reviewer: Hiruma Musouka (Anonymous)
04 Aug 2009 4:51 pm
Bedraggled
Reviewer: FeDhu (Signed)
23 Feb 2008 11:20 pm
This is oddly...sweet, though wrong in so many ways. :)
Author's Response: I love to write the "wrong" stuff. ;)
Author's Response: I love to write the "wrong" stuff. ;)
Bedraggled
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
23 Feb 2008 7:55 pm
Yay, he found the Raven. That was scary. :) This was wonderful little story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Bedraggled
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
23 Feb 2008 7:52 pm
This is cute. :) Awww, we all knew that Mr. Fluffles couldn't not help the Raven. :)
Author's Response: He's just one big ball of fluff. Well, okay, he isn't, but still. ;)
Author's Response: He's just one big ball of fluff. Well, okay, he isn't, but still. ;)
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Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
23 Feb 2008 11:51 am
Awwww! This is really cool.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
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