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Reviewer: farchild628 (Signed)
06 Mar 2008 2:12 am
Very nice. I really like this. You've got both of these characters down, especially Teyla. She has an unusual way of speaking that you've captured perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! For the kind words and for reviewing. :)
Chapter 1