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Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous)
28 Aug 2008 8:57 pm
I really dont like the way you portray Teyla here at all. John had every right to be upset with her. She tells him out of the blue in a public place that she is pregnant and you dont think he has a right to be angry and hurt. I dont recognize your Teyla and dont see her ever acting this way. She is part of Johns team and she could have put them in danger. Things can go wrong in pregnancy and the first trimester can be the most unpredictable. Teyla had a resonsibility to the team and she put them in danger. If she was on Athos or not on the team then she can do what she likes but I am totally behind Johns reaction and can understand why he was hurt and angry that she couldnt come and confide in him. I guess I see this scene totally different to how you do.
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Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2008 6:39 am
That's so good! I love it. You've really captured the essence of each character and used them really well! Thanks for it.
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Reviewer: angelwings (Signed)
09 Mar 2008 2:14 am
love the reactions, wish this was canon, would have been great to see, thanks xxx
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Reviewer: Madison (Signed)
08 Mar 2008 4:12 am
Oh how excellent. I wish that canon had taken this direction--it was a scene we all needed to see. Sigh.
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Reviewer: Aelfgyfu (Anonymous)
08 Mar 2008 12:52 am
I love how you've worked the whole team in, even though it's mostly about John and Teyla. You've got a good balance, with some understanding of how they each feel and why. I like how Teyla accepts his apology even though she knows he doesn't mean it--and how John manages to be even more of a disfunctional mess than Rodney.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
08 Mar 2008 12:02 am
Great character pieces for all the team, particularly Teyla and her thoughts.

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Reviewer: abharding (Signed)
07 Mar 2008 10:37 pm
Wonderful. I loved this look into Teyla as she deals with the not so supportive reaction of someone she thinks of as family.

I also loved Rodney's reaction. It was just so him...
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