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Reviewer: rexeran (Signed)
04 May 2013 12:17 am
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Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
09 Mar 2008 7:00 pm
Eeep!
I almost *almost* didn't see the 'chapter2' part and thought that it ended and Lorne was *dead!* Thanks for saving him!
Good story, btw. Too short!
Sq

Author's Response: it was intended to be. i haven't decided if i'm going to write a long version or not.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
08 Mar 2008 12:32 pm
:D Woah. Had me worried for a second. But glad things worked out in the end.
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Reviewer: PJ (Anonymous)
08 Mar 2008 9:48 am
Very cute. I really like the idea of Evan on a death mission instead of John all the time. (Now John knows how Evan feels) And of course Evan couldn't be dead.

The story moved a little fast though... would've liked to see more John angst though or maybe a scene with Caldwell rescuing Lorne.

Author's Response: I have gotten in this habit lately of writing longer fics. I had this idea of Lorne facing death and Sheppard not being able to do anything about it. I didn't want to drag it out. I wanted to see if I could evoke the same emotion and story line in a short. Though I tend to agree with you, with a few more scenes it could be better. :-)
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