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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Apr 2008 12:10 am
Oh, this was just heartbreaking :(.


Author's Response: I know, wasn't it? It was sad for me to write.
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Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
01 Apr 2008 11:27 pm
This was so beautiful and sad. The last part of the last sentence was very poignant for me. 'Atlantis was quiet.'

Not only did it create such a stunning visual and emotional picture for me, it also made me realise that one of the similarities that Atlantis and Rodney share is the fact that both of them are always busy, active. But when Rodney became 'quiet', so did Atlantis...

*So* well done.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. *blush* I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
12 Mar 2008 10:58 am
I have a teeny tiny stargate keychain. You should totally get one; they are so cute. Though I have been teased that I have a silver cock-ring on my key chain . . . anyway. Bleeding fatally? Please explain how he is not considered dead then?

Author's Response: Oh, now I so want one! How do I get one? Where did you get yours?rnrnAnd lesse. Just because he's bleeding fatally, doesn't mean they can't get help in time or him to not die, but now that I think of it, I think that he will be dead and that I have an idea for what the next chapter can be. :3
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Mar 2008 10:46 am
It is so refreshing to see characters die. Now if they would only stay dead. Minus Carson. Carson dying sucks. Sucks HARD. So glad you didn't kill Carson. Can we assume that your dead man assended?

Author's Response: *whispers* Well, I never said he was dead, just that he was fatally bleeding all over the place... :3
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Reviewer: Llanea (Signed)
09 Mar 2008 10:18 pm
more! more! pease? pretty please with teeny ting stargates on top?
this is awesome

Author's Response: They make teeny tiny stargates? Wow. I didn't know that.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
09 Mar 2008 9:50 pm
So sad and that would happen too. Thank you for this beautiful and heartbreaking piece.

Author's Response: Thank you.
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