Reviews For Creases in Distant, Dark Places
I enjoyed this story, but it doesn't seem finished. What does Atlantis have against Rodney, and what does she do next?
Reviewer: C.Thia (Anonymous)
13 Apr 2008 9:02 am
Lots of great one line jokes: Zelenka and the time loops, "It will not be pleasant, but those known as 'marines' are remarkably proficient at scrubbing blood from between tiles," John thinking about how people pay attention to his body, etc. The explanation of where the ammo went was funny. Very good.
I enjoyed reading this.
:D Very nice.