Reviews For Dance, Bob, Weave
Reviewer: Gate Gurl (Signed)
04 Dec 2008 7:25 pm
Interesting I liked this! Too bad it is done, ever considered continuing it? It would be cool to see what happens next!
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
20 Mar 2008 10:06 am
That was very good! I hope you intent keep writting about this.
If Radek's doesn't fall to Lorne's feet at the first hint of interest it would be good.
Author's Response: First Radek would have to talk to me, but thank you!
If Radek's doesn't fall to Lorne's feet at the first hint of interest it would be good.
Author's Response: First Radek would have to talk to me, but thank you!
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Reviewer: Lady Taevyn (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2008 8:56 pm
Oh My. This was wonderfully tense. I liked how you undercut the thoughts with the moves Evan was making, it kept the story active. But there needs to be more! I'm not above bribery
*offers Chocolate Chip cookies*
Author's Response: But there needs to be more! Possibly if Radek talks to me... otherwise I can at least promise more Lorne in the near future--*stares at yummy cookies* thank you! for the fb ;-)
*offers Chocolate Chip cookies*
Author's Response: But there needs to be more! Possibly if Radek talks to me... otherwise I can at least promise more Lorne in the near future--*stares at yummy cookies* thank you! for the fb ;-)
Chapter 1