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Reviewer: Azamiko (Signed)
20 Apr 2012 5:59 am
...I kind of thought it was John's dream causing it.
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
28 Jun 2009 2:37 am
Great, thanks.
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Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
24 Mar 2008 8:20 am
LOL! The last haiku is great. Nice job.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
21 Mar 2008 4:15 am
That's one way to stave off the cold. :)
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
21 Mar 2008 1:00 am
Way cool story! (The Ancient heat is broken and the City's computers are spouting mystic poetry.) I'm famous even in the future...Bwhahahha. Sorry, couldn't resist. Loved the story and that they got together at the end.

Author's Response: FAMOUS, I tell ya! Thanks so much for the review!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Anonymous)
21 Mar 2008 12:42 am
I hear pop rocks and BJs can be quite interesting also:o

Author's Response: I was so tempted to work the various legends in there, but I thought I'd better stick to the original one I was assigned! Thanks for commenting!
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