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Reviewer: Vana (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2008 2:57 am
It got all serious, but the ending was delightfully reminiscint of the beginning, and poor Carson's portrayl in this story was randomly funny enough to get rid of the former seriousness. Lol I still don't understand why Nola was kicking John in the throat if it wasn't her... Although it makes sense that the baby was screaming because she saw the ghost. X3 I think I'll just keep rereading the beginning. The first half of the story was hilarious; I love Ronon's outlook on everything. "Will you be my wife?" "All right!" *rolls eyes* Lol
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Reviewer: Vana (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2008 12:28 am
OH MY GOD. I'm only a third of the way through the story and every line keeps making me laugh so hard I can't even read the page. I'm crying at this point, and I'm not even finished! OH GOD! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Yes. That was necessary. I'm still laughing. Ronon's outlooks... *Starts snorting she's laughing so hard.* I can't keep reading this! *Wipes away the tears and calms down by not thinking about it* Okay. Back to the story. I just had to get that done before my heart seizes from getting no oxygen. When I say that everything was making me laugh, I mean everying. There was a pause when John announced it was his kid, and then we got in the debriefing room and I, honestly, laughed with every single sentence. I'd take a breath-- and start laughing again. This is incredible. Okay, enough talk. Back to the story. When I need to breathe again, I'll post another comment, since the story is so long. XDDDDD
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Reviewer: Chanel (Signed)
30 Mar 2008 11:10 am
Fantastic story!! It really made me laugh.
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Reviewer: Amanda Beckett (Signed)
27 Mar 2008 9:00 am
OMG this is hilarious!

"I think she is beautiful, like a lamb, or a dead Wraith."

"With the power of the Gods in my hand, I name you Neutrogena."

John guessed he could be glad that his alien baby didn't look like Elvira, who looked a little like tapioca, except for glowy and with tentacles.

"I love you," Ronon said, coming up behind Elizabeth. "Will you be my wife?"

Ronon is so random, and he says the funniest things! This was absolutely awesome and totally funny. Poor Chuck :(
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Anonymous)
27 Mar 2008 2:28 am
Carson's mad ghost did not see that coming, shame about the baby going but glad she wasn't evil.
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Reviewer: Emma (Signed)
27 Mar 2008 1:49 am
Complete and utter crack! I was laughing out loud. Thanks for the story.
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