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Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Signed)
01 Apr 2008 1:48 am
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story! I really appreciate it. This is part of about 100,000 words (actually a bit more than that) that started out as the first SGA that I wrote. Lauren is "Mary Sue's" alter-ego, and I'm not totally pleased with that part of the characterization (but like I said, it was my first effort). I am trying to polish this up a bit, as she needs a few character flaws to make her less perfect, but I've got two others to finish and two to add sequels to. All these people rattling around in my head! Keep checking--my real life is more insistent than I'd like it to be, but I'll try to get more for you. Thanks again for your kind words--they mean a lot!
Radek and the Red Dress
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
30 Mar 2008 8:52 am
This was a lovely story that was well put together. I loved the way that the red dress became a character in its own right.

Ii also liked Radek's reaction to it. It made me smile.

I also liked the way that Radek and Lauren interacted as wee. The way that the story unfolded was very believable.

I also liked the way that you wrote the sex scene. Very romantic and fluffy.

Although this was part of a previous story, is there any chance that there could be a sequel because I would love to see this paring taken further.
Radek and the Red Dress