Reviews For Breadth
Lovely little scene. It was strange, yet good, to see Rodney quiet and insightful like that, something he only does with John that John can relish. It's nice to see the level of friendship and trust between tham that they can have that sort of quiet time, almost more intimate than the kissing (which was also very nice *g*).
So Rodney...so perfect. Nice little insight.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
01 Apr 2008 8:43 pm
For me, this reads less like fanfic and more like the author is trying to deliver a lecture about sexuality. The characters got lost in all the author's opinions.