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Reviewer: Martha (Anonymous)
30 Apr 2008 3:20 am
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Team love is the best!
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Reviewer: Neena (Signed)
06 Apr 2008 4:55 pm
I had a great deal of fun reading this! I particularly liked the scene in the cave when Teyla snapped at John and Rodney for their chatting. It was priceless and I lauged out loud (which is something I rarely do when reading ;)

Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
06 Apr 2008 12:21 am
This had just the right mix of tension and peril with humour. I'm glad the bad guys turned out to be okay for once and I'm glad the team was relatively unharmed. Poor John- let's hope he keeps his mouth shut from now on or I fear his team will do him in before whatever he's said gets to go wrong!

Great team dynamics. The bickering was both amusing and terribly frustrating. I could understand Teyla's irritation even as I was grinning at the pointless arguments. I guess she's learnt the hard way that it doesn't pay to be too smug!

Very entertaining, with some funny moments, some exasperating moments and some tense moments.

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