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Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous)
03 May 2008 9:39 pm
Glad to see another chapter so soon! You're doing an excellent job keeping this story engaging and the characters real. I'm really looking forward to where you're taking us with this fic! I hope you can update soon :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I've worked hard to make the characters real. I didn't want Nia to be a Mary Sue, so I was very careful when creating her personality. The next chapter is in the que awaiting admin approval. :)
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Reviewer: Brody (Anonymous)
03 May 2008 5:51 am
This is well written and interesting. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
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Reviewer: susanne (Anonymous)
02 May 2008 10:25 pm
wow jen, sheer wow. you have to write more. all the todd thunkers in gateworld love it ;) and i especially wanna see todd whoop that wraiths ass.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I just realized I forgot to tell the Todd Thunk thread about the update. I've been really scattered lately. I blame my children. It's all them. LOL We'll see Veritus again soon. Thanks for your review! :)
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Reviewer: laurec (Anonymous)
01 May 2008 9:58 am
Ohm, I was slightly wary at first, 'cause OCs have a tendency to turn out Mary-Sue'ish, but Nia's actually rather realistic. Wraith/Human relationships, and the possibility of such, have always intrigued me greatly - I mean, both seem to be physically quite compatible - and Todd's just the perfect Wraith for such an... experiment. :D *pets him* Nice explanation for his name, too. I wonder if Sheppard's psychic? xP

Author's Response: I know exactly how you feel about OCs. I've run into that myself--many times. I worked hard to balance Nia's character so she didn't end up being labeled a Mary Sue, so I'm very glad you find he realistic. I'm a very new SGA fan, having watched all four seasons only a month ago, and one of my first thoughts was wondering what kind of relationships the Wraith might actually have with the humans on their ships. Seeing as Todd gives you fighting chance of not getting eaten immediately, I decided he was perfect for my experiment, too. That and he's my favorite character on the show. rnrnYou know, I had a lot of issue with how to explain Todd's name. I didn't want to come up with a random name for him, so I came up with that story. Shep must have picked up on it when Todd fed on him, right? LOL Thanks for the review! :)
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
01 May 2008 2:34 am
Oh man, angsty complicated goodness. This really is a a great piece, totally unique.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying my story! And I'm thrilled to hear it is unique. :) Thank you so much for your review.
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Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous)
29 Apr 2008 10:57 pm
What an interesting take on this character! I love how you're writing him and Nia. Great job so far - looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying my story. I just got the final beta of chapter three back this morning, so I'll be updating soon. Thanks for the review! :)
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Reviewer: Wraith Fan (Anonymous)
25 Apr 2008 5:56 pm
I so love this story!!!Todd is so emotional and caring, and is he in love with Nia? Please continue this supercool story :)
greetz: Wraith Fan -xXx-

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the start of my story! You know, I'm not sure Todd knows how he feels about Nia yet. He is attracted, but he doesn't quite know what to make of her. Thank you so much for your review! The second chapter is in the second beta phase, so I'll have it posted in the next couple of days. :)
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
25 Apr 2008 1:33 am
I love this piece! It's something I'v never seen before, and a really great idea. XD

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying my story so far. I'm very, very new to the SGA fandom, and I haven't read much, so I'm glad to hear I've managed an original idea. :) Thank you so much for your review!
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