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Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
09 Jul 2008 9:33 pm
Man, that was a trim and powerful piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you....this took forever to write. :D
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Reviewer: atymer (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2008 6:22 am
Well written and researched story. The emotions John experiences in flight would not be denied. Do that and he would certainly fight for the freedom to feel again. I remained curious as to who had attempted to control him until the end.

Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted this to be tense and realistic.
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