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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
03 Apr 2009 9:01 am
I liked this story very much, though it seemed a bit rushed at the end. Thanks for sharing I enjoyed reading it.
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
10 May 2008 7:59 am
This was very good for your first story. For future stories, try more showing what is happening then telling and don't try to rush things or events. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more of your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to keep that in mind and do better the next time!
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
10 May 2008 6:18 am
I want more, more of all of it. You have a created a unique story line and I want to see more of it, live more of it with them.

Great job...

Author's Response: Thank you! This was meant as a one-shot, but who knows what my muses come up with...
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
09 May 2008 7:35 pm
Wow this is really good and against those odds yeah it would be John and Rodney *g*

Author's Response: Yeah, it's always then, isn't it? *grin* I'm glad you liked it! Thans for the review!
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: Fenchurch (Signed)
09 May 2008 4:14 pm
Aw! Lovely! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked!
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
09 May 2008 2:26 am
Yay to Lilith and yay for a little sister for her. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Prompt 28 - children
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
08 May 2008 10:59 pm
Aw, I loved it! :3 Loved the happy ending, too. And a pregnant Rodney is always so much fun.

Author's Response: Hehe, I love m-pregs and I thought a pregnant Rodney would be fun. Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Prompt 28 - children