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Reviewer: Vana (Anonymous)
12 Jul 2008 6:59 pm
"You were pretty thirsty." GOD! I was DYING when that part came up. Elizabeth's sarcasm was right on key. Funny story, absolutely great and light hearted. I LOVED the ending. XDD They were just having a good time. I have to say, after John mentioned the girl was the "high preistess" I got a little suspicious, but I just kinda took them at their words. Lol John! Elizabeth's line is still my favorite though. Thanks for the laughs and the hinting at "cute 'aw' moment" at the end. ^_^
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
22 May 2008 6:06 am
LOL, that is soooo true. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. One wonders what other mission reports John has, uh, modified. If you like this, you'll probably like "Breeding Ground."
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Reviewer: Kateri (Signed)
22 May 2008 3:57 am
LOL, oh that was fantastic! Wonderfully done

Author's Response: Thank you! You know, if you like this, you'll probably "Early Birds" and "Breeding Ground."
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
22 May 2008 1:33 am
*L* Yes, I suppose that is true. :)

Author's Response: Sheppard has always had a pragmatic streak. rnrn
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Reviewer: bubbysbub (Signed)
22 May 2008 1:25 am
"See, McKay had this grass skirt thing on and it caught fire...." my kids now think i am an absolute loon from the loud braying hysterical laughter from that line alone. this was just the funniest thing i have read in a while. almost peed myself!!! filled with awesumness, fantastic, amazing, crackiest crack ever, tears of laughter drying on my face. well done.

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. *g* Let's see... if you like humor, you might like "Breeding Ground," "And Liberty For All" and "Pavlovian."
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