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Reviewer: Michaels girl (Signed)
24 Aug 2010 10:02 am
I love your story. It is perfect!
Please continue with it. I really want to now, what will happen next.
Chapter 6
Reviewer: angela21 (Signed)
19 Jul 2008 10:42 am
I'm loving this story, its SO the way things should have been.

Please update soon!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
03 Jun 2008 5:20 pm
Maybe, if there is some cooperation with Michael this time, Beckett's clone might not have to be put in stasis.

I still worry about what will happen to the two of them when the real world comes back into play, but at least things between them have kind of settled down. At least they can take comfort together and in each other now.

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so excited that you're enjoying the story so far! I've been working on the next chapter, but I'm not quite finished with it yet. I'm hoping to have it up within the next few days. I've got it all planned out, I just need to finish writing it, LOL. Thanks again!
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
29 May 2008 3:44 pm
Pretty soon, Michael's got to own up to his actions, and stop blaming everyone else. I do love the dolt, though. I don't see how this can end well, for anyone. After the first chapter, things could have gone differently for Michael. But now... there's been too much killing. I'm worried about all three of them.

Author's Response: Yep, he will have to own up to his actions. The problem is that he really doesn't think he's doing anything wrong. He thinks that everything he's doing is necessary. *sigh* Poor boy! The next chapter was just updated, if you'd like to read it. I hope that you enjoy it!
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
29 May 2008 3:35 pm
Oh, God. After the first part of this story, for some reason, I didn't think Michael would go on and commit the acts that he did in canon. The fear and horror on her face must have been terrible for him.

Author's Response: I'm sure that it was, but I think you'll like how things turn out when they finally sit down and talk to each other without yelling. At least, I hope you do, LOL! Thank you for the review!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: alexis2011 (Signed)
24 May 2008 2:33 pm
That was good. You have to post more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I did submit a chapter earlier today, it just hasn't been approved yet. Hopefully, it will be up later! I hope you like it!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: mita (Anonymous)
22 May 2008 6:30 pm
my God!! you have to continue soon, or else, I'll go mad... It was really great, and I love it (I still didn't get the chance to see season 4, but I know a lot trough spoilers)
please post something else soon.
bye

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! I think I may almost be done with chapter two. Not so sure yet, but I'm fairly certain. I have another scene to write for it, but I already know what it is going to be, I just have to do it, LOL. I'll try to get it up in the next few days.
Chapter 1
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