Reviews For Show...Don't Tell

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Reviewer: Azamiko (Signed)
21 Apr 2012 1:44 pm
...Poor Ronan. I used to use a bucket...>_> Or a rock, more than once.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
13 Dec 2009 9:55 pm
Now that's my kind of fishing! Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
29 May 2008 6:40 am
Rodney turned his head sideways. "Are we still talking about fishing?" he asked in that quiet, little-boy voice that did John in, the one Rodney used sometimes when he realized he was in a bit over his head.

Oh, awwwww. The fishing analogy was very corny, but cute. This was a blast, thank you ;)

Author's Response: They were corny weren't they? I think I did that on purpose 'cause John was being so tongue in cheek with Rodney, knowing that Rodney's not too thick not to get it. I had a lot of fun writing this one and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 May 2008 10:46 pm
Looks like John found the ideal way of announcing his feelings after all. I don't know what he was worried about *g*.


Author's Response: Hee! Yes, but John just wasn't ready - Lorne gave him a big push!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
25 May 2008 7:01 pm
Lovely and this line gave me a giggle fit..."Eyes forward," John directed and Rodney obeyed. "Now, if you'll follow my advice and make sure you have a firm grip on your rod, it'll help make your cast longer."

"I wouldn't be at all surprised," Rodney mumbled. Loved all the fishing advice as a metaphor.
John definitely got the catch of the day:)

Author's Response: Thank you. I know the fishing metaphors were corny, but you know John! I had so much fun writing this and I'm so glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 May 2008 6:37 pm
Oh, wow! That was beautiful! I loved this!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you did. And so sorry for the late response.
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