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I just laughed my way through that ending. John's sudden realization was priceless!! Rodney's little "carrying banners" snark was cute too.

Author's Response: sorry for the late reply, have only just read your lovely review. thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

very funny. i could very well imagine a night with rodney and shep actually ending up like this :)

Author's Response: thank you, yes it's never going to go smoothly is it? LOL

Shirtless and bootless. Great. This was just the beginning of the relationship and he was already running around half-naked on McKay's orders. LOL!

Loved the encounter with the 4 new recruits; Keller's waggling eyebrows; sneaky Lorne; clueless John in his conversation with Lorne; and the Rodney/John interaction/characterizations.

Author's Response: thank you so much for such a detailed review,it really helps to see what readers think works.

*snickersnort*
My favorite line has already been mentioned twice, so I won't do it again, lol. Loved this to bits!

Author's Response: thanks so much glad you liked it

Sweet and funny, loved the bit about Lorne..."Rodney, wake up. I think I've given permission for my second in command to be gay!" Well it's only fair.

Author's Response: thanks so much, youre absolutely right, Lorne needs some loving!!!

*L* I love this and John's accidently giving permission to Lorne and Parrish. :)

Author's Response: thank you you're very kind. I do have a secret wish to see a Lorne Parrish happy ending!!