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Reviewer: Vana (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2008 12:09 am
I just laughed my way through that ending. John's sudden realization was priceless!! Rodney's little "carrying banners" snark was cute too.

Author's Response: sorry for the late reply, have only just read your lovely review. thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: rosey_angel (Signed)
30 May 2008 11:58 pm
very funny. i could very well imagine a night with rodney and shep actually ending up like this :)

Author's Response: thank you, yes it's never going to go smoothly is it? LOL
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
29 May 2008 6:32 am
Shirtless and bootless. Great. This was just the beginning of the relationship and he was already running around half-naked on McKay's orders. LOL!

Loved the encounter with the 4 new recruits; Keller's waggling eyebrows; sneaky Lorne; clueless John in his conversation with Lorne; and the Rodney/John interaction/characterizations.

Author's Response: thank you so much for such a detailed review,it really helps to see what readers think works.
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Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
28 May 2008 7:01 am
My favorite line has already been mentioned twice, so I won't do it again, lol. Loved this to bits!

Author's Response: thanks so much glad you liked it
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
27 May 2008 3:26 am
Sweet and funny, loved the bit about Lorne..."Rodney, wake up. I think I've given permission for my second in command to be gay!" Well it's only fair.

Author's Response: thanks so much, youre absolutely right, Lorne needs some loving!!!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
26 May 2008 9:36 pm
*L* I love this and John's accidently giving permission to Lorne and Parrish. :)

Author's Response: thank you you're very kind. I do have a secret wish to see a Lorne Parrish happy ending!!
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